as promised today in class, below you will find the grade evaluation sheet I will be using when I read the final draft of out of class essay 1, due next Wednesday.
NAME______________________________________________
ENG.20---SPRING
SEMESTER 2015
Out of Class Essay #1—Evaluation
Grade
Earned:___________________
General Comments:
If
there is a check ( )
next to an item or items listed below, this indicates one or more of those
errors was found in your essay. I WILL ALWAYS NOTE MOST ERRORS, AT LEAST ONCE,
DIRECTLY ON THE ESSAY; HOWEVER, I DO NOT INDICATE EVERY ERROR. You are the
final editor/proofreader of your work. Whether
or not you revise this essay, please take note of the errors so they are not
repeated in your next essay.
_____sentence
level errors (comma splice; run on; fragment; spelling error; punctuation
error; error in capitalization; etc.)
_____paragraph
(s) has more than one main idea
_____problems
with transitions between paragraphs
_____organization
issues
_____wordiness
_____repetitiveness
_____issues
with tense
_____lack
of sentence variety (in length and/or in beginnings)
_____tone/rhetoric
(too casual for an academic essay)
_____very
general, flat, uninteresting vocabulary
_____lack
of supportive details/evidence
_____does
not address the prompt accurately and/or completely
_____use
of you and/or your
_____unacceptable
errors (# of errors found:________)
_____MLA
documentation errors
OTHER ISSUES:
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